Comics - 059 - Just a runny nose
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sentiashinou : April 17th, 2009, 8:26 am :
I really like the way you create atmosphere on all your pages. And your writing is really entertaining. :3

Just one thing I noticed (about this page anyway, though it might be true of other pages to some extent), is the way the speech bubbles are placed... Especially in panel 2, the last speech bubble leads your eyes into panel 4, creating a little confusion on order of panels and bubbles. It's apparent from context what order they go in so it's not a huge deal, but it's something to consider.

Sorry I ranted. D: I look forward to your next update~
X4I : April 17th, 2009, 8:42 am : Oopsie!
Sentiashinou, thank you for your kind review and your constructive criticism.
When i'm working on these i'm so into it that i overlook such things.

Now that it's off my work area and on the site (the comic's natural habitat) i can see you are quite right in your observations.

I'll tweak the bubbles and update the image.

Everybody who sees non confusing bubbles, make sure to thank Sentiashinou for that, K?
vince (Guest) : April 23rd, 2009, 7:10 pm : Nice
Gast, goed bezig!

Gegroet, uw barman at Stairway
Jesse (Guest) : April 25th, 2009, 1:35 pm : Go Marnix
hey man, ik vind het echt een vette comic, zeker doorgaan zo!

groeten, Jesse
(jeweetwel, van nelleke, jeweetwel, die vriendin van je ma)



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